This is from Chapter One of my untitled western time travel (which is rare for me - I ALWAYS start with a title!)
Maybe by next week when I post another six sentences I'll have a title to go with it.
Until then, I hope you enjoy meeting my heroine, Lillian Bennett.
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Lillian didn't share Rose's obsession for the run down
ghost town. But, she loved Grandma Rose and was determined to honor her last
wishes, even if it meant following the crazy rules of a ninety year old woman's
will.
"Spend one night in Prosperity. Believe."
The usually stoic lawyer hadn't been able to hide his
amusement when he announced her inheritance. "Your grandmother left you
Prosperity, Lillian."
She could still remember the sinking feeling in the pit of
her stomach. Oh, how she wished for once prosperity meant money and not a bunch
of run down buildings in the middle of nowhere.
Happy Sunday my friends!
I love the opening of this story.
ReplyDeleteLove it. :D
ReplyDeleteThis is fabulous! I have a feeling Prosperity will turn out better than Lillian ever dreamed. Great six! Hey, 'Prosperity' would be a nice title. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks ladies! I think I finally came up with a title that works perfectly - will reveal soon! :)
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